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DFC 2015: 1. Outliving Fear

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January 18, 2016
DFC 2015: 1. Outliving Fear by kiwi-damnation is a strong expression of self-empowerment and triumph over the trauma that can so destroy our lives. 
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When darkness rips away her joy
With claws that flay and deftly tear,
Her bones and sinew are laid bare
As lifeless as a tattered toy,
Her heartbeat gently pulses quick
Beneath that skin like porcelain,
Each slash breeds more adrenaline
As palms grow slick and breath constricts,
Her eyes see nothing but the pain,
Her very sanity is slain,
But as she clutches onto hope
And feels the fibres of her rope,
She knows that daylight’s face is near
Which means she will outlive the fear.
This is a Sardine, an American form for Day 1 of DFC 2015 with ProjectDFC Please read  DFC 2015 - The Dance Begins! You Can Do This!Hello all, it's me MagicalJoey here, reporting live from the ProjectDFC desk of all desks. We have a situation on our hands folks! A DIRE situation! Oh the HORROR, the GORE, the REVOLTING SMUT! Wait, that was October...but you get my drift!
Project DFC is nearly half-way through!


What is DFC?
Do I hear thee utter this question? Oh poor souls, how could you not know> Never fear, I shall tell!
DFC stands for December Forms Challenge and is a challenge that has been running for many years now. It takes place from 00h00 December first until 00h00 January first and is a poetry forms challenge, where you are provided with different fixed forms of poetry to write on. It is a poem, and a form, a day for 31 days!

What Does This Mean For Me?
This means the following: YOU (yes you, and you, and the on
 for more deets on the challenge and check out the Form Chart: DFC Form Chart 2015 by kiwi-damnation

The Sardine or Sonondilla was created by “The Dread Poet Roberts”. It features 14-lines of tetrameter (preferably iambic) with the following rhyme schemes: abbacddceeffee or abbaabbaccddcc . I chose abbacddceeffee.

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Yes the subject matter isn't happy. I have PTSD. It is fucking hell. This is just a little peek into the world of chronic mental illness. Sorry it isn't very happy. Last Saturday was hard for me, but I outlived it. At the end of the day, that's all that matters.

EDIT: I made a soundcloud of this piece: soundcloud.com/kiwi-damnation/…
© 2015 - 2024 kiwi-damnation
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This is a wonderful poem and you absolutely deserved  your DD. Take things day by day. Tripe, I know, and I'm sorry to sound that way, but sometimes it is the only way to get through, and whatever works, no matter how small the victory may seem to others, is a victory.
Stay strong. :heart: