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I thought you were my weakest part,
The girl who cried of broken heart,
Of torment true and motives clear,
That all you knew was love and fear.

I wished for you to die my dear,
For you’re the one who had the tears,
And while I hoped you far away,
I didn’t think there’d come a day.

Yet here I think about you now,
And I see the truth somehow,
As I fought all the battles- you,
Let the poison eat at you.

‘I didn’t know you took the blows,
Which is why you couldn’t grow’

For someone had to feel the pain,
As we were slashed over again,
And while I thought that you were small,
I couldn’t see your strength at all.

For you were half of me you know,
Together we could always show,
The caring, loving sides to see,
While being vigilantly me.

So lost without you here my friend,
What’s left is working hard to mend,
The scattered pieces left of me,
As I struggle now to be.

‘This journey isn’t easy- yes,
But for now I’ll do my best’
©2008-2009 =kiwi-damnation
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:iconbigheartplz:

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I may find comfort here.
I may find peace within the emptiness.
How pitiful.
that was beautiful
i very rarely actually sit and read and reread poems for depth, and i did.
i read this one like three times
i reallyyyyy like it, good emotional imagery
Three times?? :omfg: That's wow... I don't do that either but sometimes you can't help it. Thank you so much!

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One who lives without love can never truly live... One who embraces love can never truly die... 'kiwi-damnation'
Read this a few times, seems quite personal. Very well written.

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Thanks and yeah it is :D

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One who lives without love can never truly live... One who embraces love can never truly die... 'kiwi-damnation'
:hug:

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One who lives without love can never truly live... One who embraces love can never truly die... 'kiwi-damnation'
yeah i know, im shocked too
but it really was fantasticccc
:blowkiss:
Aww thanks a lot.

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One who lives without love can never truly live... One who embraces love can never truly die... 'kiwi-damnation'
:cuddle:

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I may find comfort here.
I may find peace within the emptiness.
How pitiful.

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