I thought you were my weakest part,
The girl who cried of broken heart,
Of torment true and motives clear,
That all you knew was love and fear.
I wished for you to die my dear,
For youre the one who had the tears,
And while I hoped you far away,
I didnt think thered come a day.
Yet here I think about you now,
And I see the truth somehow,
As I fought all the battles- you,
Let the poison eat at you.
I didnt know you took the blows,
Which is why you couldnt grow
For someone had to feel the pain,
As we were slashed over again,
And while I thought that you were small,
I couldnt see your strength at all.
For you were half of me you know,
Together we could always show,
The caring, loving sides to see,
While being vigilantly me.
So lost without you here my friend,
Whats left is working hard to mend,
The scattered pieces left of me,
As I struggle now to be.
This journey isnt easy- yes,
But for now Ill do my best















Devious Comments
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I may find comfort here.
I may find peace within the emptiness.
How pitiful.
i very rarely actually sit and read and reread poems for depth, and i did.
i read this one like three times
i reallyyyyy like it, good emotional imagery
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One who lives without love can never truly live... One who embraces love can never truly die... 'kiwi-damnation'
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One who lives without love can never truly live... One who embraces love can never truly die... 'kiwi-damnation'
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One who lives without love can never truly live... One who embraces love can never truly die... 'kiwi-damnation'
but it really was fantasticccc
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One who lives without love can never truly live... One who embraces love can never truly die... 'kiwi-damnation'
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I may find comfort here.
I may find peace within the emptiness.
How pitiful.
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