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There is a room.

The room is divided,
On one side the lanterns burn brightly,
Their warmth and glow flickering upon hopeful faces,
Love and rapture so present in every heart,
While their counterparts,
Who dwell on the other side,
Languish in the cold breeze,
And chilling embrace,
Of the darkness,
There is peace in misery they say,
Comfort in the familiarity of agony and sorrow.
We choose to linger here.
Here is our home.

One child stands alone,
Looking at each side with curiosity- with wonder,
She can’t decide where to go,
For although it is obvious that the warmth is hope,
And the light is happiness,
She knows that in embracing the shadows,
There is indeed peace in its miserable arms,
And knowledge to be gained from the chill on her skin.

Sitting between the two she gathers a blanket,
And lights a tiny flame,
Here she is human,
Covered in shadow,
Immersed in light.
:iconkiwi-damnation:
This just came to me... All of us, no matter how good we try to be and how honourable we are at heart- have shadows. We all have parts of ourselves that we dislike.

I am sort of dealing with some of these revelations within myself.

Love you all,

Sammy
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:iconferelwing:
*Ferelwing Aug 7, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:iconbigheartplz: Wonderful work hon! :iconcuddle: Wow!
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*kiwi-damnation Aug 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you beautiful sister :) :hug: That means more than words can say :)
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:iconferelwing:
*Ferelwing Aug 11, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:iconbigheartplz: You're so very welcome!
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=MistRaven Aug 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Wow Sammy I could relate to this big time. Very well written hun love it thanks for sharing it with us :hug:
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*kiwi-damnation Aug 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Awww hon. Love you! Thank you so much! :glomp:
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=MistRaven Aug 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
welcome hun love ya too :hug:
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*alapip Aug 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
kiwi-Sam,

wherever the inspiration arose
from, i think this analogy is
wonderful in its "variability".

it can be applied to religious
faith in all sorts of ways, pro
and con. it draws images of
courage and caution in love. it
does the same for life in general,
including risk and reward vs
conservative harboring.

all this varied interpretation
may not have been initially
intended by you, but it is there,
along with our internal shadows
and light; our destiny, or our
choice, the familiar vs the dared.

...all this from your beautiful
words and images, Sam. brilliant!

:heart:
pip
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*kiwi-damnation Aug 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Awww thank you dear pip. I know what you mean. I did mean to infuse religion and belief systems in with it, but some of course is accident and also interpretation by anyone. Thank you so much :D
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:iconrenegade-angel23:
Spectacular write Sammy :hug: seriously
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*kiwi-damnation Aug 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Awww thank you honey... :hug: I seem to be free forming a lot lately. Am going to just flow with it and see where it takes me :)
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